# ![](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/topic_icons/realm667_repo/user/rep_rejected.png) \[Submission\] Blackhole Imp ## - **Yuzoo** - ![Yuzoo's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar11369.png?1571857557) Topic Author - Dark Imp - ![Dark Imp](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_41_darkimp.png) Less More- Posts: 8 - - 6 years 9 months ago - 5 years 6 months ago [\#7646](#7646) by Yuzoo *[\[Submission\] Blackhole Imp](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1327-submission-blackhole-imp#7646 "Name: Blackhole Imp Difficulty: Medium Connection: Imp Summon: BlackHoleImp Melee: Yes Distance: Projectile Type: Demon, Entity Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Code: Yuzoo Sprites: Yuzoo Sounds: Doom, Stock sounds Idea Base: Monster concept based on League of Legends Dark Star theme, fused with an imp A simple imp from hell, corrupted by the dark and infinite space, letting place to an horrible creature with nothing but obliteration on its mind. It got rid of its legs, now being able to fly freely to spread the horrors of space. This monster can manipulate gravity, it shoots mini blackholes, that will attract anything it meets on the projectile. This thing can also abduct you from distance, in hope to lacerate you to shreds. And if it wasn't enough, it can also travel via portals while moving around, to make sure they keep being close. When it dies, it provoke a huge shockwave, obliterating the monster in the process. It may be just an imp, but do not underestimate it. They can be a quite a challenge to take on if you're inside an enclosed space, and even worse if they are in pack. UPDATED: Added GLDEF back with better lightning. Download Link: https://www.m*diafire.com/file/gi57c0d5hq515dk/BlackholeImp.wad/file")* was created by *Yuzoo* Name: Blackhole Imp Difficulty: Medium Connection: Imp Summon: BlackHoleImp Melee: Yes Distance: Projectile Type: Demon, Entity Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Code: Yuzoo Sprites: Yuzoo Sounds: Doom, Stock sounds Idea Base: Monster concept based on League of Legends Dark Star theme, fused with an imp A simple imp from hell, corrupted by the dark and infinite space, letting place to an horrible creature with nothing but obliteration on its mind. It got rid of its legs, now being able to fly freely to spread the horrors of space. This monster can manipulate gravity, it shoots mini blackholes, that will attract anything it meets on the projectile. This thing can also abduct you from distance, in hope to lacerate you to shreds. And if it wasn't enough, it can also travel via portals while moving around, to make sure they keep being close. When it dies, it provoke a huge shockwave, obliterating the monster in the process. It may be just an imp, but do not underestimate it. They can be a quite a challenge to take on if you're inside an enclosed space, and even worse if they are in pack. UPDATED: Added GLDEF back with better lightning. Download Link: https://www.m*diafire.com/file/gi57c0d5hq515dk/BlackholeImp.wad/file - [ DKSIA1.png ![DKSIA1.png](https://www.realm667.com/forum/attachment/803?download=1) ](https://www.realm667.com/forum/attachment/803?download=1 "DKSIA1.png") [ ](https://www.realm667.com/forum/attachment/803?download=1 "DKSIA1.png") Last edit: 5 years 6 months ago by Yuzoo. Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xMzI3LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24tYmxhY2tob2xlLWltcA==&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **Yuzoo** - ![Yuzoo's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar11369.png?1571857557) Topic Author - Dark Imp - ![Dark Imp](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_41_darkimp.png) Less More- Posts: 8 - - 6 years 9 months ago - 6 years 9 months ago [\#7650](#7650) by Yuzoo Replied by *Yuzoo* on topic *[\[Submission\] Blackhole Imp](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1327-submission-blackhole-imp#7650 "Name: Blackhole Imp Difficulty: Medium Connection: Imp Summon: BlackHoleImp Melee: Yes Distance: Projectile Type: Demon, Entity Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Code: Yuzoo Sprites: Yuzoo Sounds: Doom, Stock sounds Idea Base: Monster concept based on League of Legends Dark Star theme, fused with an imp A simple imp from hell, corrupted by the dark and infinite space, letting place to an horrible creature with nothing but obliteration on its mind. It got rid of its legs, now being able to fly freely to spread the horrors of space. This monster can manipulate gravity, it shoots mini blackholes, that will attract anything it meets on the projectile. This thing can also abduct you from distance, in hope to lacerate you to shreds. And if it wasn't enough, it can also travel via portals while moving around, to make sure they keep being close. When it dies, it provoke a huge shockwave, obliterating the monster in the process. It may be just an imp, but do not underestimate it. They can be a quite a challenge to take on if you're inside an enclosed space, and even worse if they are in pack. UPDATED: Added GLDEF back with better lightning. Download Link: https://www.m*diafire.com/file/gi57c0d5hq515dk/BlackholeImp.wad/file")* Updated monster: -Reduced number of particles emanated from the fireball attack. -Removed GLDEFS for better performances. -Added some sounds and effects to the distance pull attack. -Reduced melee damage for all melee attacks (the pull is chained with a melee attack that is stronger than usual). -Slightly increased speed of the monster. -The pull is now a little bit stronger. Last edit: 6 years 9 months ago by Yuzoo. Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xMzI3LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24tYmxhY2tob2xlLWltcA==&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **rachael** - ![rachael's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/core/svg/person.svg) - Zombieman - ![Zombieman](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_2_zombie.png) Less More- Posts: 1 - - 6 years 7 months ago [\#7783](#7783) by rachael Replied by *rachael* on topic *[\[Submission\] Blackhole Imp](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1327-submission-blackhole-imp#7783 "Name: Blackhole Imp Difficulty: Medium Connection: Imp Summon: BlackHoleImp Melee: Yes Distance: Projectile Type: Demon, Entity Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Code: Yuzoo Sprites: Yuzoo Sounds: Doom, Stock sounds Idea Base: Monster concept based on League of Legends Dark Star theme, fused with an imp A simple imp from hell, corrupted by the dark and infinite space, letting place to an horrible creature with nothing but obliteration on its mind. It got rid of its legs, now being able to fly freely to spread the horrors of space. This monster can manipulate gravity, it shoots mini blackholes, that will attract anything it meets on the projectile. This thing can also abduct you from distance, in hope to lacerate you to shreds. And if it wasn't enough, it can also travel via portals while moving around, to make sure they keep being close. When it dies, it provoke a huge shockwave, obliterating the monster in the process. It may be just an imp, but do not underestimate it. They can be a quite a challenge to take on if you're inside an enclosed space, and even worse if they are in pack. UPDATED: Added GLDEF back with better lightning. Download Link: https://www.m*diafire.com/file/gi57c0d5hq515dk/BlackholeImp.wad/file")* Can you include the GLDEFS? Most systems should be able to handle it just fine, and it should be up to the resource author whether to include them or not. At any rate, GZDoom has ways to cope with the lag if that's an issue on the user's end, too (simply by turning the lights off). Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xMzI3LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24tYmxhY2tob2xlLWltcA==&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **Yuzoo** - ![Yuzoo's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar11369.png?1571857557) Topic Author - Dark Imp - ![Dark Imp](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_41_darkimp.png) Less More- Posts: 8 - - 6 years 6 months ago [\#7794](#7794) by Yuzoo Replied by *Yuzoo* on topic *[\[Submission\] Blackhole Imp](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1327-submission-blackhole-imp#7794 "Name: Blackhole Imp Difficulty: Medium Connection: Imp Summon: BlackHoleImp Melee: Yes Distance: Projectile Type: Demon, Entity Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Code: Yuzoo Sprites: Yuzoo Sounds: Doom, Stock sounds Idea Base: Monster concept based on League of Legends Dark Star theme, fused with an imp A simple imp from hell, corrupted by the dark and infinite space, letting place to an horrible creature with nothing but obliteration on its mind. It got rid of its legs, now being able to fly freely to spread the horrors of space. This monster can manipulate gravity, it shoots mini blackholes, that will attract anything it meets on the projectile. This thing can also abduct you from distance, in hope to lacerate you to shreds. And if it wasn't enough, it can also travel via portals while moving around, to make sure they keep being close. When it dies, it provoke a huge shockwave, obliterating the monster in the process. It may be just an imp, but do not underestimate it. They can be a quite a challenge to take on if you're inside an enclosed space, and even worse if they are in pack. UPDATED: Added GLDEF back with better lightning. Download Link: https://www.m*diafire.com/file/gi57c0d5hq515dk/BlackholeImp.wad/file")* Sorry for the wait, i've been away for some time, but I heard your request and added back GLDEFS with even better lights. Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xMzI3LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24tYmxhY2tob2xlLWltcA==&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **Gothic** - ![Gothic's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar320.png?1619787674) - Moderator - ![Moderator](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_20_barrel.png) Less More- Posts: 1329 - - - 6 years 1 month ago [\#8275](#8275) by Gothic Replied by *Gothic* on topic *[\[Submission\] Blackhole Imp](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1327-submission-blackhole-imp#8275 "Name: Blackhole Imp Difficulty: Medium Connection: Imp Summon: BlackHoleImp Melee: Yes Distance: Projectile Type: Demon, Entity Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Code: Yuzoo Sprites: Yuzoo Sounds: Doom, Stock sounds Idea Base: Monster concept based on League of Legends Dark Star theme, fused with an imp A simple imp from hell, corrupted by the dark and infinite space, letting place to an horrible creature with nothing but obliteration on its mind. It got rid of its legs, now being able to fly freely to spread the horrors of space. This monster can manipulate gravity, it shoots mini blackholes, that will attract anything it meets on the projectile. This thing can also abduct you from distance, in hope to lacerate you to shreds. And if it wasn't enough, it can also travel via portals while moving around, to make sure they keep being close. When it dies, it provoke a huge shockwave, obliterating the monster in the process. It may be just an imp, but do not underestimate it. They can be a quite a challenge to take on if you're inside an enclosed space, and even worse if they are in pack. UPDATED: Added GLDEF back with better lightning. Download Link: https://www.m*diafire.com/file/gi57c0d5hq515dk/BlackholeImp.wad/file")* If you're worried about the lag, then don't give GLDEFS to the smaller particles, they really don't need them and reduce them to half. And again, the sounds don't need to be on stereo unless they play on full volume, the sounds occupy 3/4ths of the size of this wad. And a recommendation to avoid messy code, stuff like this: Code: TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) TNT1 A 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) Can be reduced to this: Code: TNT1 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA 0 A_SpawnItemEx("StarParticle", random(-72, 72), random(-72, 72), random(5, 24), -6, 0, 0, 0, SXF_NOCHECKPOSITION) You also use NULL states sometimes instead of TNT1, that should be changed. Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xMzI3LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24tYmxhY2tob2xlLWltcA==&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **Yuzoo** - ![Yuzoo's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar11369.png?1571857557) Topic Author - Dark Imp - ![Dark Imp](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_41_darkimp.png) Less More- Posts: 8 - - 5 years 6 months ago [\#8752](#8752) by Yuzoo Replied by *Yuzoo* on topic *[\[Submission\] Blackhole Imp](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1327-submission-blackhole-imp#8752 "Name: Blackhole Imp Difficulty: Medium Connection: Imp Summon: BlackHoleImp Melee: Yes Distance: Projectile Type: Demon, Entity Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Code: Yuzoo Sprites: Yuzoo Sounds: Doom, Stock sounds Idea Base: Monster concept based on League of Legends Dark Star theme, fused with an imp A simple imp from hell, corrupted by the dark and infinite space, letting place to an horrible creature with nothing but obliteration on its mind. It got rid of its legs, now being able to fly freely to spread the horrors of space. This monster can manipulate gravity, it shoots mini blackholes, that will attract anything it meets on the projectile. This thing can also abduct you from distance, in hope to lacerate you to shreds. And if it wasn't enough, it can also travel via portals while moving around, to make sure they keep being close. When it dies, it provoke a huge shockwave, obliterating the monster in the process. It may be just an imp, but do not underestimate it. They can be a quite a challenge to take on if you're inside an enclosed space, and even worse if they are in pack. UPDATED: Added GLDEF back with better lightning. Download Link: https://www.m*diafire.com/file/gi57c0d5hq515dk/BlackholeImp.wad/file")* Hi there, sorry for the late answer, and thank you very much for the feedback ! I've made the code less messy, removed the light effect from the particles, and reduced the number of particles in general ! If there's anything else to fix, i'm on it ![:)](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/emoticons/cacsmi.gif ":)") Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xMzI3LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24tYmxhY2tob2xlLWltcA==&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **Gothic** - ![Gothic's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar320.png?1619787674) - Moderator - ![Moderator](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_20_barrel.png) Less More- Posts: 1329 - - - 5 years 5 months ago - 5 years 5 months ago [\#8762](#8762) by Gothic Replied by *Gothic* on topic *[\[Submission\] Blackhole Imp](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1327-submission-blackhole-imp#8762 "Name: Blackhole Imp Difficulty: Medium Connection: Imp Summon: BlackHoleImp Melee: Yes Distance: Projectile Type: Demon, Entity Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Code: Yuzoo Sprites: Yuzoo Sounds: Doom, Stock sounds Idea Base: Monster concept based on League of Legends Dark Star theme, fused with an imp A simple imp from hell, corrupted by the dark and infinite space, letting place to an horrible creature with nothing but obliteration on its mind. It got rid of its legs, now being able to fly freely to spread the horrors of space. This monster can manipulate gravity, it shoots mini blackholes, that will attract anything it meets on the projectile. This thing can also abduct you from distance, in hope to lacerate you to shreds. And if it wasn't enough, it can also travel via portals while moving around, to make sure they keep being close. When it dies, it provoke a huge shockwave, obliterating the monster in the process. It may be just an imp, but do not underestimate it. They can be a quite a challenge to take on if you're inside an enclosed space, and even worse if they are in pack. UPDATED: Added GLDEF back with better lightning. Download Link: https://www.m*diafire.com/file/gi57c0d5hq515dk/BlackholeImp.wad/file")* The effects look better now, I say it's the right ammount of particles.I see you want to keep the sounds as they are, which is understandable, however I'm still worried about the massive file size of the sounds. I converted your sounds to MP3 and back again to OGG with a converter, and I managed to reduce their size: [ Download here.](https://drive.google.com/file/d/1fSb0iG_3sW-04gVfMFRevYliTt6Mcbru/view?usp=sharing) As for the monster sprites, I'm not sure. I don't know what's going on with the head, and personally I'm not a fan of blurry or transparent sprites (even though I submitted the Hologram props, heh). The projectile and effects are ok though. This is just my opinion, and if nobody else cares, then it will be ok to go. Last edit: 5 years 5 months ago by Gothic. Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xMzI3LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24tYmxhY2tob2xlLWltcA==&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **Yuzoo** - ![Yuzoo's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar11369.png?1571857557) Topic Author - Dark Imp - ![Dark Imp](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_41_darkimp.png) Less More- Posts: 8 - - 5 years 5 months ago [\#8767](#8767) by Yuzoo Replied by *Yuzoo* on topic *[\[Submission\] Blackhole Imp](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1327-submission-blackhole-imp#8767 "Name: Blackhole Imp Difficulty: Medium Connection: Imp Summon: BlackHoleImp Melee: Yes Distance: Projectile Type: Demon, Entity Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Code: Yuzoo Sprites: Yuzoo Sounds: Doom, Stock sounds Idea Base: Monster concept based on League of Legends Dark Star theme, fused with an imp A simple imp from hell, corrupted by the dark and infinite space, letting place to an horrible creature with nothing but obliteration on its mind. It got rid of its legs, now being able to fly freely to spread the horrors of space. This monster can manipulate gravity, it shoots mini blackholes, that will attract anything it meets on the projectile. This thing can also abduct you from distance, in hope to lacerate you to shreds. And if it wasn't enough, it can also travel via portals while moving around, to make sure they keep being close. When it dies, it provoke a huge shockwave, obliterating the monster in the process. It may be just an imp, but do not underestimate it. They can be a quite a challenge to take on if you're inside an enclosed space, and even worse if they are in pack. UPDATED: Added GLDEF back with better lightning. Download Link: https://www.m*diafire.com/file/gi57c0d5hq515dk/BlackholeImp.wad/file")* Thank you very much for your comment ! I probably didn't pay attention to the filesize, but I will change that for sure, thank you ![:)](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/emoticons/cacsmi.gif ":)") As for the sprite, sadly I have never done sprite editing in my life before, so this is a first time for me, I guess it's far from perfect but eventually I will change that once I get better ! Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xMzI3LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24tYmxhY2tob2xlLWltcA==&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. [Powered by](https://www.realm667.com/forum/credits) [Kunena Forum](https://www.kunena.org)