# ![](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/topic_icons/realm667_repo/user/rep_rejected.png) \[SUBMISSION\] Whiplash ## - **Ak47fu2** - ![Ak47fu2's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar12236.png?1703469467) Topic Author - Chaingunner - ![Chaingunner](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_6_chaingunner.png) Less More- Posts: 64 - - - - 2 years 7 months ago [\#11445](#11445) by Ak47fu2 Replied by *Ak47fu2* on topic *[\[SUBMISSION\] Whiplash](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1985-submission-whiplash?start=10#11445 "Name: Whiplash Difficulty: Easy Connections: None Summon: Whiplash Melee: Yes Distance: No Type: Cybernetic demon Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Credits: Code: Ak47fu2 Sounds: Id Software, Bethesda, and Evil Banana 202 (ripped sounds and put them in a yt video). Sprites: ID Software, Vader, Finalizer, HorrorMovieGuy, Raymoohawk, Damien Daurio, and Craneo. Idea Base: Doom Eternal whiplash. Description:The Doom Eternal whiplash!")* Hmm. I will likely try that. Also how do I make the custom states? I am trying to make some more states for the Carcass right now and then the whiplash after and it will not let me. Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xOTg1LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24td2hpcGxhc2g/c3RhcnQ9MTA=&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **Ak47fu2** - ![Ak47fu2's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar12236.png?1703469467) Topic Author - Chaingunner - ![Chaingunner](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_6_chaingunner.png) Less More- Posts: 64 - - - - 2 years 7 months ago [\#11446](#11446) by Ak47fu2 Replied by *Ak47fu2* on topic *[\[SUBMISSION\] Whiplash](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1985-submission-whiplash?start=10#11446 "Name: Whiplash Difficulty: Easy Connections: None Summon: Whiplash Melee: Yes Distance: No Type: Cybernetic demon Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Credits: Code: Ak47fu2 Sounds: Id Software, Bethesda, and Evil Banana 202 (ripped sounds and put them in a yt video). Sprites: ID Software, Vader, Finalizer, HorrorMovieGuy, Raymoohawk, Damien Daurio, and Craneo. Idea Base: Doom Eternal whiplash. Description:The Doom Eternal whiplash!")* I got it working this is the new whiplash with all of the upgrades (although no hitbox change since as you said it is kinda pointless). Also here are the new credits with you and Raven Added added: Credits: Code: Ak47fu2 and Gothic Sounds: Id Software, Bethesda, and Evil Banana 202 (ripped sounds and put them in a yt video). Sprites: ID Software, Vader, Finalizer, HorrorMovieGuy, Raymoohawk, Damien Daurio, and Craneo. Projectile from Raven Software's "CyClones" Sprite edits: Gothic (projectile recolor) Idea Base: Doom Eternal whiplash. - [ Whiplash.zip ](https://www.realm667.com/forum/attachment/1910?download=1 "Whiplash.zip") [ ](https://www.realm667.com/forum/attachment/1910?download=1 "Whiplash.zip") Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xOTg1LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24td2hpcGxhc2g/c3RhcnQ9MTA=&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **DeVloek** - ![DeVloek's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar11145.png?1542216928) - Arachnotron - ![Arachnotron](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_10_arachno.png) Less More- Posts: 416 - - 2 years 7 months ago - 2 years 7 months ago [\#11447](#11447) by DeVloek Replied by *DeVloek* on topic *[\[SUBMISSION\] Whiplash](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1985-submission-whiplash?start=10#11447 "Name: Whiplash Difficulty: Easy Connections: None Summon: Whiplash Melee: Yes Distance: No Type: Cybernetic demon Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Credits: Code: Ak47fu2 Sounds: Id Software, Bethesda, and Evil Banana 202 (ripped sounds and put them in a yt video). Sprites: ID Software, Vader, Finalizer, HorrorMovieGuy, Raymoohawk, Damien Daurio, and Craneo. Idea Base: Doom Eternal whiplash. Description:The Doom Eternal whiplash!")* That's pretty cool already. Here's some code you can use to make it slither randomly left and right, using A_Recoil. Code: See: TNT1 A 0 A_SetSize(20,59) WHIP AABBCCDDEE 3 A_Chase TNT1 A 0 A_Jump(127,"Slither") Loop Slither: TNT1 A 0 A_SetSize(20,38) TNT1 A 0 A_FaceTarget TNT1 A 0 A_SetAngle(angle+randompick(-45,45)) WHIP UUUUUUU 1 A_Recoil(-3) TNT1 A 0 A_FaceTarget TNT1 A 0 A_SetAngle(angle+randompick(-45,45)) WHIP UUUUUUU 1 A_Recoil(-3) TNT1 A 0 A_FaceTarget TNT1 A 0 A_SetAngle(angle+randompick(-45,45)) WHIP UUUUUUU 1 A_Recoil(-3) TNT1 A 0 A_Stop TNT1 A 0 A_Jump(127,"See") Loop That's all I can do with Decorate, I'm sure there's room for improvement. btw I included the size change because I like the idea of a monster ducking under your rockets. Now all it needs is a projectile attack that can be used when outside whipping range. Right now the monster uses the whip even when outside the range, you should prevent that. 750 is the whip's range, so a A_JumpIfCloser value of 720 or something like that should do. Last edit: 2 years 7 months ago by DeVloek. Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xOTg1LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24td2hpcGxhc2g/c3RhcnQ9MTA=&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **Ak47fu2** - ![Ak47fu2's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar12236.png?1703469467) Topic Author - Chaingunner - ![Chaingunner](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_6_chaingunner.png) Less More- Posts: 64 - - - - 2 years 7 months ago [\#11453](#11453) by Ak47fu2 Replied by *Ak47fu2* on topic *[\[SUBMISSION\] Whiplash](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1985-submission-whiplash?start=10#11453 "Name: Whiplash Difficulty: Easy Connections: None Summon: Whiplash Melee: Yes Distance: No Type: Cybernetic demon Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Credits: Code: Ak47fu2 Sounds: Id Software, Bethesda, and Evil Banana 202 (ripped sounds and put them in a yt video). Sprites: ID Software, Vader, Finalizer, HorrorMovieGuy, Raymoohawk, Damien Daurio, and Craneo. Idea Base: Doom Eternal whiplash. Description:The Doom Eternal whiplash!")* Thanks. I will add the new slithering. Maybe the last attack could be a shockwave which in reality is a floorhugger projectile? I would switch the whip to it's own state and make the missile state the shockwave attack. Only issue is how do I have it pick randomly between its 3 attack options (whip, move and melee, or shockwave)? Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xOTg1LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24td2hpcGxhc2g/c3RhcnQ9MTA=&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **DeVloek** - ![DeVloek's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar11145.png?1542216928) - Arachnotron - ![Arachnotron](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_10_arachno.png) Less More- Posts: 416 - - 2 years 7 months ago [\#11456](#11456) by DeVloek Replied by *DeVloek* on topic *[\[SUBMISSION\] Whiplash](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1985-submission-whiplash?start=10#11456 "Name: Whiplash Difficulty: Easy Connections: None Summon: Whiplash Melee: Yes Distance: No Type: Cybernetic demon Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Credits: Code: Ak47fu2 Sounds: Id Software, Bethesda, and Evil Banana 202 (ripped sounds and put them in a yt video). Sprites: ID Software, Vader, Finalizer, HorrorMovieGuy, Raymoohawk, Damien Daurio, and Craneo. Idea Base: Doom Eternal whiplash. Description:The Doom Eternal whiplash!")* "Only issue is how do I have it pick randomly between its 3 attack options (whip, move and melee, or shockwave)?" **A\_Jump** can randomly jump to any state you want. You can also use **A\_JumpIf**, **A\_JumpIfCloser** and some other jump functions for finetuning. Check out the wiki, there's a ton of possibilities https://zdoom.org/wiki/Category:Decorate_Jump_functions Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xOTg1LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24td2hpcGxhc2g/c3RhcnQ9MTA=&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **Ak47fu2** - ![Ak47fu2's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar12236.png?1703469467) Topic Author - Chaingunner - ![Chaingunner](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_6_chaingunner.png) Less More- Posts: 64 - - - - 2 years 7 months ago [\#11461](#11461) by Ak47fu2 Replied by *Ak47fu2* on topic *[\[SUBMISSION\] Whiplash](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1985-submission-whiplash?start=10#11461 "Name: Whiplash Difficulty: Easy Connections: None Summon: Whiplash Melee: Yes Distance: No Type: Cybernetic demon Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Credits: Code: Ak47fu2 Sounds: Id Software, Bethesda, and Evil Banana 202 (ripped sounds and put them in a yt video). Sprites: ID Software, Vader, Finalizer, HorrorMovieGuy, Raymoohawk, Damien Daurio, and Craneo. Idea Base: Doom Eternal whiplash. Description:The Doom Eternal whiplash!")* Thanks. I will look into it Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xOTg1LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24td2hpcGxhc2g/c3RhcnQ9MTA=&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **Ak47fu2** - ![Ak47fu2's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar12236.png?1703469467) Topic Author - Chaingunner - ![Chaingunner](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_6_chaingunner.png) Less More- Posts: 64 - - - - 2 years 7 months ago [\#11463](#11463) by Ak47fu2 Replied by *Ak47fu2* on topic *[\[SUBMISSION\] Whiplash](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1985-submission-whiplash?start=10#11463 "Name: Whiplash Difficulty: Easy Connections: None Summon: Whiplash Melee: Yes Distance: No Type: Cybernetic demon Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Credits: Code: Ak47fu2 Sounds: Id Software, Bethesda, and Evil Banana 202 (ripped sounds and put them in a yt video). Sprites: ID Software, Vader, Finalizer, HorrorMovieGuy, Raymoohawk, Damien Daurio, and Craneo. Idea Base: Doom Eternal whiplash. Description:The Doom Eternal whiplash!")* Here he is without the reflect but with the other fixes. - [ BloodMaykr.zip ](https://www.realm667.com/forum/attachment/1913?download=1 "BloodMaykr.zip") [ ](https://www.realm667.com/forum/attachment/1913?download=1 "BloodMaykr.zip") Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xOTg1LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24td2hpcGxhc2g/c3RhcnQ9MTA=&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **Ak47fu2** - ![Ak47fu2's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar12236.png?1703469467) Topic Author - Chaingunner - ![Chaingunner](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_6_chaingunner.png) Less More- Posts: 64 - - - - 2 years 7 months ago [\#11464](#11464) by Ak47fu2 Replied by *Ak47fu2* on topic *[\[SUBMISSION\] Whiplash](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1985-submission-whiplash?start=10#11464 "Name: Whiplash Difficulty: Easy Connections: None Summon: Whiplash Melee: Yes Distance: No Type: Cybernetic demon Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Credits: Code: Ak47fu2 Sounds: Id Software, Bethesda, and Evil Banana 202 (ripped sounds and put them in a yt video). Sprites: ID Software, Vader, Finalizer, HorrorMovieGuy, Raymoohawk, Damien Daurio, and Craneo. Idea Base: Doom Eternal whiplash. Description:The Doom Eternal whiplash!")* Oh wait this is the wrong thread lol. I will put the blood maykr in the blood maykr thread. Not sure how to delete messages though lol Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xOTg1LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24td2hpcGxhc2g/c3RhcnQ9MTA=&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **Ak47fu2** - ![Ak47fu2's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar12236.png?1703469467) Topic Author - Chaingunner - ![Chaingunner](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_6_chaingunner.png) Less More- Posts: 64 - - - - 2 years 7 months ago [\#11467](#11467) by Ak47fu2 Replied by *Ak47fu2* on topic *[\[SUBMISSION\] Whiplash](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1985-submission-whiplash?start=10#11467 "Name: Whiplash Difficulty: Easy Connections: None Summon: Whiplash Melee: Yes Distance: No Type: Cybernetic demon Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Credits: Code: Ak47fu2 Sounds: Id Software, Bethesda, and Evil Banana 202 (ripped sounds and put them in a yt video). Sprites: ID Software, Vader, Finalizer, HorrorMovieGuy, Raymoohawk, Damien Daurio, and Craneo. Idea Base: Doom Eternal whiplash. Description:The Doom Eternal whiplash!")* I tried making the shockwave attack. It did not go the best lol. Any ideas on how to improve it? - [ Whiplash.zip ](https://www.realm667.com/forum/attachment/1915?download=1 "Whiplash.zip") [ ](https://www.realm667.com/forum/attachment/1915?download=1 "Whiplash.zip") Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xOTg1LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24td2hpcGxhc2g/c3RhcnQ9MTA=&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. - **DeVloek** - ![DeVloek's Avatar](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/avatars/resized/size144/users/avatar11145.png?1542216928) - Arachnotron - ![Arachnotron](https://www.realm667.com/media/kunena/ranks/rank_10_arachno.png) Less More- Posts: 416 - - 2 years 7 months ago [\#11488](#11488) by DeVloek Replied by *DeVloek* on topic *[\[SUBMISSION\] Whiplash](https://www.realm667.com/forum/closed-submissions/1985-submission-whiplash?start=10#11488 "Name: Whiplash Difficulty: Easy Connections: None Summon: Whiplash Melee: Yes Distance: No Type: Cybernetic demon Brightmaps: No Actor modification: No ACS: No Credits: Code: Ak47fu2 Sounds: Id Software, Bethesda, and Evil Banana 202 (ripped sounds and put them in a yt video). Sprites: ID Software, Vader, Finalizer, HorrorMovieGuy, Raymoohawk, Damien Daurio, and Craneo. Idea Base: Doom Eternal whiplash. Description:The Doom Eternal whiplash!")* the shockwave projectile has a lot of issues: - it's extremely slow, needs to be much faster - it should be a seekermissile (but with a rather slow turn rate, nothing too crazy) - the sprite looks really bad, replace it with something better Please [Log in](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/login?return=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cucmVhbG02NjcuY29tL2ZvcnVtL2Nsb3NlZC1zdWJtaXNzaW9ucy8xOTg1LXN1Ym1pc3Npb24td2hpcGxhc2g/c3RhcnQ9MTA=&Itemid=2662) or [Create an account](https://www.realm667.com/component/users/registration?Itemid=2662) to join the conversation. [Powered by](https://www.realm667.com/forum/credits) [Kunena Forum](https://www.kunena.org)